With all the drama involving the ladies at Jamaica, a new group on the block is looking to reform the freshmen and sophomore students, turning them into well respected young ladies. The new group called The Sophisticated Ladies was formed by Ms.Williams and a senior class student, Kera Robinson.
Ms. Williams one of the founders of the group, hopes to admit fifteen students each term, making her final decision after an interview. Her topics will be based on self-esteem issues, decision making, and adventurous issues that often pop up in the lives of young teens. While teaching a new skill each week, Ms.Williams wants to be a positive influence for each member of The Sophiscated Ladies.
"I think its something the girls need", said Ms. Williams stating her opinion on the group. "I have faith".
A source who wishes to remain anonymous says, "the group is a good thing; the world does need more ladies because everyone wants to be tough and hard. No-one is compassionate and affectionate."
Freshmen and sophmores are being encouraged to join the group, especially those in need of expressing themselves and have the ability to keep an open mind. Ms.Williams hopes to run a group for ten to twelve weeks, with meetings held once weekly on Thursdays, starting mid March.The group of Sophisticated Ladies hopes to accomplish positive influences in their daily lives.
" I would join The Sophisticated Ladies because just the name catches my attention", says Tiffany Vermon, a sophmore. " It sounds catchy". Even though the group has a goal, the name alone attracts the attention of freshmen and sophmores, who hopefully will achieve something to benefit themselves.
While Ms.Williams hopes to have a tea party, she also hopes for the group to be a success and continue to be the group where a girl learns how to be a lady.
9 comments:
Need to capitalize a few words and have some grammer errors. It was a nice article which was brief and explained what the club was about. Great Job!
Camille I like the artcile beacuse it let me know exctly what the club is. Although there were grammar errors overall it was a good article.
I thought the topic was good. It was good first article.
Its really good because you told me exactly what the club was.
Good Work!
Good article...very informative... try to avoid "when asked..." before a quote. try to encourage people not to remain anonymous. few grammatcal errors
Camille, great first piece!
I do want to see clearer paragraph breaks. Also, try to stay away from "when asked about...". Just report what was said and then explain why.
I did want to hear the voice of the studetns too!
This is a good artice. There is a lot of information about the new club. Also, I really liked the first paragraph.
I feel that the article was really good for your first try. You repeated yourself in that last para. when you talked about Mrs.Williams hoping to get at least 15 ladies a term.Nice job.
The title is great. In the lede instead of writing "dramas" you should have wrote drama.
Fix the format because the words being all bunched together make it difficult to read.
the ending was great. It wrapped the article together.
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